Rate and grade this awesome rap. if it's a low, tell me why.?

wack, who be thse pityful fool say more about the teachers just say more about the emo the bay moms struglin stressed out it sound better and here another pair of six graders getin on like horny beagle word gone mad is this even legal its like you just wrote then joint didnt even reread when u a emcee u your worst credit people tell u is hott rewrite cuz if not a pro what they know u your number one credit i am a emcee and never feel like write hot pieces i do but always try make it hotter and good luck with the contest homie keep reppin if you gonna do it just dont do it hhalf ***